yea
get better sounds. make a song thats not the same thing over and over without just blatent repitition. its good tho. i think u need to change slayer around alittle bit to fix the song but is good keep trying
yea
get better sounds. make a song thats not the same thing over and over without just blatent repitition. its good tho. i think u need to change slayer around alittle bit to fix the song but is good keep trying
thanks for the help ill take it into consideration
no. EPIC PHAIL
epic phail in my book. sadly someone told me that if i can easily recognized multiple sounds blatantly, that means that its an EPIC PHAILURE!!! like no offense but right off the bat you are using crappy shit from the template which suck anyway cus the ppl i kno, and including myself, only use the default VST's in fruity to make their own sounds, seeing as the presets suck ASS!! heres an example. never again. big phailure dude. srsly i am sry. you need a song structure cant just put song on top of song and shit it got suckky 3 for effort 2 for vote. try harder
sorry man, this was one of my worst pieces, check out some of my more recent stuff :D
Let's see here...
I dunno what to say but i can make something. some of the trance songs on newgrounds contain complex scores similar in complexity to famous classical writers. then others are like the mainstream artists who focus that potential into the beats of the song since they are meant to be danced to. i felt that you didn't work on this as much as you could've but you have the potential to make a real good song. i suggest making longer, catchier melodies when you repeat, and use the trance beats that we all know and love. if you want to be rly good and get 10s and 5s, then get good beats and a good melody. I'm giving you a 3 cus it wasnt suck but im not dancing either. on this review you got a 6 because of weak melodies, that were backed up by the overplayed trance beats(that didnt change in the song either.) hope this helps, Steelside out.
This song wasnt really intended for you to be dancing too...
ordinary
when you make it, you have to put some chords in, raise the volume for the main melody, put some like breakdowns and build ups, and stress on the melody.
Thanks for the great advice! Will definitely remember that.
uuhhh
i cant listen more than 10 seconds, it kinda is earpiercing thru my speakers and it makes my speakers spazz, umm i think its just a bad choice on the sound.
Thanks for the review!
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